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I wasnít a child forever
Was I?
To you
When you see me
Iím forbidden.
Your eyes
I can feel them
The need
The desire
Whatís holding you back?


We feel the same
Unspoken words
Reaching out
I know that
You donít.
Eyes flicker away
Not seeing
Not staring
But you still are
Why are you holding back?


The past has flown
Out of reach
We cannot hold on
So letís let go
And be all we are
You and I
Together
Our bond
Unbreakable.
You donít believe
Wonít believe
In me
Iím nothing to you
Nothing
But you canít fight this feeling


Iíve changed
Youíve stayed the same
And forever youíll be fighting this.
But if you donít love me
Then why are you here?
Under this moonlit night
With nothing but me
And the whisper of the wind.
Twitching
Not looking
Not feeling
Turning cold
Oblivious


Donít turn around
Come back
Are you trying to fight it again?
Touch your hand
Cold as ice
But my fingers lock with yours.
Electricity
Recognition
We feel it
We share it.
You turn
Our eyes meet
I feel complete
You belong here
With me.
Iíve changed
Iím not the child I was
So stayÖ


The stars could disappear for all I care
And the world could end around us.
So long as we stand here
Forever
Just the two of us
In this moment
Then my heart will never break.
As long as you agree
That this path was shaped for you and me
Iíll never let go of your hand
And my love for you will never end
I've forgotten who I originally wrote this for. I think I wrote it for Rin and Sesshoumaru out of Inuyasha, but I'm not so sure because it says things like "Electricity... Recognition..." Which just sounds like L.J.Smith.

ANYONE CAN READ THIS. You don't have to be an L.J.Smith fan or Inuyasha fan.
If this was for Rin she was meant to be older, I guess. It fits her.

Comment please!
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EnthusiasticArtist Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2011  Student Writer
This is amazing!Keep up the awesome work!
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bad-vibe Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2009
i love this. it really touches me. thank you for putting it out there!
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cupcake-of-chaos Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008
This is perfect for Fluffy-sama/Rin, it really is. Especially the way that Sesshoumaru -would- be all distant and cold, but still there with her and not admitting that he cares. Also the way that Rin would be changing and growing but Sessh would be staying the same.

This poem is really good - it takes a lot to make me like something this long, but there's something in this that makes it connect. Well done. :)
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alicecullenroxx Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2008   Writer
aw its so sweet...
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OX-CAB Featured By Owner May 14, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
so sweet ^_^
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Before-I-Sleep Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, so sweet, well written! :D
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salvatore-shan Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2006   Writer
:glomp: Thank you!
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animegirl007 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2006
It's a nice poem...I really envision Rin saying those things to Sesshomaru....Beautiful work.... :floating:
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salvatore-shan Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2006   Writer
Thank you! :hug:
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Wynterstoops Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this!!!!
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